I only wrote for about an hour today--I'm being generous in that estimate--from around 8:30PM. I finished less than a page, I think, but I was pleasantly surprised.
Today I was fine-tuning Uli's entrance, and while for the most part I struggled over minor things--in what order to describe her features; how to make her sound tough without turning her into a bully cliche. Ultimately I decided that she's not really purely tough. I really liked this. It gave her more depth and, I think, brought her closer to the Uli in my head. Moreover, it allowed us to get a better look at why Seffy is so drawn to her. And it allowed me to write the kind of long, esoteric passage I like, but I don't quite expect that to make the final version.
That's all I wrote.
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